Peer Review History
Original SubmissionJuly 15, 2019 |
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PONE-D-19-19975 scafSLICR: a MATLAB-based Slicing Algorithm to Enable Fused Deposition Modeling 3D-Printing of Tissue Engineering Scaffolds with Heterogenous Porous Microarchitecture PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Grayson, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== ACADEMIC EDITOR: Please insert comments here and delete this placeholder text when finished. Be sure to:
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Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This research is very useful and practical. The reviewer thanks the authors for developing this free and open source software. It is a great contribution to scaffold design. However, the manuscript may need further improvement. In the title, “Fused Deposition Modelling 3D Printing” is wordy, suggest removing FDM, just use 3D Printing. The literature search on scaffold design needs a lot of improvement. Please look at Section 2 of the most recent review for the landscape of scaffold design for tissue engineering: • Yang Y, Wang G, Liang H, et al., 2019, Additive manufacturing of bone scaffolds. Int J Bioprint, 5(1): 148 Also, when reviewing slicing methods for FDM, the following relevant works are missing: • Adams, D. and Turner, C.J., 2018. An implicit slicing method for additive manufacturing processes. Virtual and Physical Prototyping, 13(1), pp.2-7. • Tamburrino, F., Graziosi, S. and Bordegoni, M., 2019. The influence of slicing parameters on the multi-material adhesion mechanisms of FDM printed parts: an exploratory study. Virtual and Physical Prototyping, pp.1-17. Equation 1, why is the right side of the equation not to the power of 3? What is the basis for using equation 1 to calculate porosity? FMD is able to print filament-based open-porous structures (layers of filament lines are stacked at different angles) as well as unit cell/strut-based open-porous structures (grid patterns of filaments are stacked with vertical struts), see works below. • Cheah, C.M., Chua, C.K., Leong, K.F., Cheong, C.H. and Naing, M.W., 2004. Automatic algorithm for generating complex polyhedral scaffold structures for tissue engineering. Tissue engineering, 10(3-4), pp.595-610. • Cheah, C.M., Chua, C.K., Leong, K.F. and Chua, S.W., 2003. Development of a tissue engineering scaffold structure library for rapid prototyping. Part 1: investigation and classification. The International Journal of Advanced Manufacturing Technology, 21(4), pp.291-301. • Cheah, C.M., Chua, C.K., Leong, K.F. and Chua, S.W., 2003. Development of a tissue engineering scaffold structure library for rapid prototyping. Part 2: parametric library and assembly program. The International Journal of Advanced Manufacturing Technology, 21(4), pp.302-312. Could the authors provide information on the time aspect of their algorithm and printing process? The authors’ work may benefit not only tissue engineering but also related fields such as food printing and drug printing (see below recent reviews). The authors should highlight this potential in the discussion. • Voon, S.L., An, J., Wong, G., Zhang, Y. and Chua, C.K., 2019. 3D food printing: a categorised review of inks and their development. Virtual and Physical Prototyping, 14(3), pp.203-218. • Lepowsky, E. and Tasoglu, S., 2018. 3D printing for drug manufacturing: A perspective on the future of pharmaceuticals. Int J Bioprint, 4(1):119. • Tan C, Toh W Y, Wong G, et al., 2018, Extrusion-based 3D food printing – Materials and machines. Int J Bioprint, 4(2): 143. Reviewer #2: The paper presents and interesting method in a clear and professional way. The literature is fairly reviewed. There are some minor comments that should be addressed, as detailed below. The section “Scaffold Design with MATLAB Script” should be clarified. The terms fibre and strut should be explicitly defined in the methods section, before the terms are used. It should be discussed at some point that the pores are actually long rectangular channel. The “square” nature of pores is simply their visual appearance when viewed top-down. It should be explained that equation 1 is the designed porosity (not measured porosity) because it seems that it is not used to calculate the experimental porosity (the DiameterJ plug-in is used). In my opinion, the porosity measured by measuring the square pore size is not directly comparable to the mass porosity (due to the pores actually being long channels). However, it seems that equation 1 is directly comparable to equation 2. Can the authors confirm whether the porosity values measured by mass or by optical microscopy are theoretically comparable? Many tissue engineering scaffold publications consider the area of pores based on measurements of the square-pore-area, so it is not necessarily a problem for this paper to do so. But it would be useful to highlight to the interested reader the limitation of measuring porosity based on top-down views (and also side views in the case of this publications). Explain how the 3D models of the designs were generated in MATLAB. E.g. were the fibres assumed to be rectangular? How was the 3D model exported and analysed? Fig 4C is not clear. The visual quality is very poor in the version supplied to me, but even without that issue, it is not clear. Is Fig 4A a top view or side view? What are the grey lines in Fig 4C? How did you analyse the models to generate the data for Fig 4C? The following sentence sounds like it is not telling the whole story: “Because the nature of the interface depends on the position, extent, and curvature of the interface surface, pattern-to-pattern interconnectivity could not be assessed experimentally and was instead measured using in silico designs of the presented examples.” … (isn’t the interface a straight surface, with a known position, extending through the model? And it seems from Fig 5A/B that a region near the interface could be analysed experimentally.) Please clarify. Scale bars in Fig 6 should have their length indicated. Scale bars should also be included in other figures. The statement “Many studies establish their techniques at scales less than 2 cm in regular cubes and cylinders, which poorly reflects the challenges tissue engineering seeks to address” is misleading. There are many applications for tissue engineering at the scale of <2cm. Furthermore, many of the key challenges related to tissue engineering are due to lack of fundamental understanding. Small structures are much more suitable for the development of fundamental understanding (especially when there are many inter-related and as-yet poorly understood factors). If all tissue engineering research had been completed using only large anatomical geometries, progress would be orders of magnitude slower due to the difficulty in manufacturing and characterisation. The present study is a good example – simple structures are used to generate almost all of the data (Figs 2-5) and the more complex structures (Fig 6) have very little quantitative characterisation. The authors should give a fair appraisal of the strengths of their study (longer term clinical application, etc.) and the strengths of research using simpler structures (research and shorter term clinical trials, etc.). With regards to the limitation of studying ABS, it is good that the authors refer to use of the software for polycaprolactone. It may be the case that nothing preventing the software from being used for any material. If so, it should be stated explicitly that the software was not developed specifically for ABS and the method could, in principle, be used for any material (with appropriate calibration/optimisation of the setup parameters). Some typographic/formatting errors: • Page 12: “Federate” in the sentence “The federate was set to 1200 mm/min and a 1% over-extrusion factor was applied throughout the entire scaffold”. • Page 13: The website link “www.mathworks.com/example” should be updated. • There is no clear difference between heading style for section heading and subsection headings. This must be corrected during final formatting of the published article. • Page 18: use 3 sig fig for all of the moduli (503, 486, 327.5). 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