Novel features of centriole polarity and cartwheel stacking revealed by cryo‐tomography

Abstract Centrioles are polarized microtubule‐based organelles that seed the formation of cilia, and which assemble from a cartwheel containing stacked ring oligomers of SAS‐6 proteins. A cryo‐tomography map of centrioles from the termite flagellate Trichonympha spp. was obtained previously, but higher resolution analysis is likely to reveal novel features. Using sub‐tomogram averaging (STA) in T. spp. and Trichonympha agilis, we delineate the architecture of centriolar microtubules, pinhead, and A‐C linker. Moreover, we report ~25 Å resolution maps of the central cartwheel, revealing notably polarized cartwheel inner densities (CID). Furthermore, STA of centrioles from the distant flagellate Teranympha mirabilis uncovers similar cartwheel architecture and a distinct filamentous CID. Fitting the CrSAS‐6 crystal structure into the flagellate maps and analyzing cartwheels generated in vitro indicate that SAS‐6 rings can directly stack onto one another in two alternating configurations: with a slight rotational offset and in register. Overall, improved STA maps in three flagellates enabled us to unravel novel architectural features, including of centriole polarity and cartwheel stacking, thus setting the stage for an accelerated elucidation of underlying assembly mechanisms.


Fig.2H vs
. In case of Teranympha, it is even more drastic - Fig.4D (major class) seems blurred along the centriolar axis, compared to Fig. 4E (minor class). This reviewer is afraid that these "major" classes might contain more than one structure and after subaveraging be blurred in detailed features. The apparent good spatial resolution could be explained, when two structures coexist and subtomograms are aligned within each subclass. Probably lower resolution at the spoke region of the major class (Fig.S2A) than that of the minor class (Fig.S2D) is a sign of heterogeneity within this class. Another risk could be subtomograms with poorer S/N being categorized to one class (due to lack of feature to be properly classified). Fig.S5F (black dots localized in one tomogram) raised this concern.
The following investigation will help to solve this issue. 1. Extract and re-classify subtomograms belonging to the major population. 2. Direct observation of tomograms. The authors could plot two classes of Teranympha (as they did for T. agilis in Fig.S5) and find features of the cylindrical cartwheel hub in two conformations (as shown Fig.4DE). Since such a feature was directly observed in tomograms from the other manuscript (left panels of Fig.S6AC in Klena et al.), it should be possible in this work as well.
3. Periodicity mismatch In Fig. 2CD, periodicity of CID has discrepancy from that of the stacked SAS-6 ring (8.5nm and 8.0nm). Do the authors think this is a significant difference or within an error? The same question can occur to other subtomogram averages. It would be nice to show errors as shown in their other manuscript (Fig.3C of Klena et al.) and clarify their idea. If it is systematic difference of periodicity between the stacked ring and CID, this shift will be accumulated through the entire cartwheel region -after 100nm, 8.5nm/8.0nm difference can be accumulated to ~6nm, which should change the entire view of the subtomogram -and the main factor to be classified (periodicity mismatch). This artifact (or influence) should be removed (or separately evaluated) by masking CID (out and in) and run classification separately. By clarifying this, the quality of the major subaverages (mentioned in the previous paragraph) could be improved.

Periodicity
They averaged subtomograms extracted with spacing of 252A with initial average as the first template (p.18 Line22). This means they assumed 25nm periodicity from the beginning and excluded different or larger unit size (if they take search range wide, they could detect difference periodicity, but will still be biased by initially assumed 25nm). 25nm average allowed them to see more detail than before (when they assumed 8nm periodicity), but there is still a risk of bias from references. To avoid this risk, this reviewer would propose classification of randomly extracted (but of course along the cylindrical hub or along the triplet microtubules, so one-dimensionally random picking) subtomograms. This experiment will end up with multiple subaverages, which are 25nm (or multiple times of that) shifted from each other. Then it will prove their assumption.
Minor points: They discussed difference of stacked SAS-6 rings in the cartwheel from various species. How much is the sequence difference of SAS-6 among these species? Are the authors sure that CID is nine-fold symmetric? It is not trivial. p.7 Line21 " Fig.S1D-O": D-L p.8 Line1: It would be nice if more detailed description about MIPs, correlating to recent high resolution works from Bui and Brown labs. p.9 Line6 "Focused 3D classification...": This sentence is unclear. p.18 5 lines from bottom "S6C, S6F": How can these panels be power spectra to measure spacing? Typo? Fig.1C: Another cross-section from the distal region will be helpful. A longer scale bar is better for readers' understanding. p.29 Line6: pin -> pink Fig.S6F: It would be informative if the subclasses (25% and 20%) are distinguished in this mapping. A figure to explain the classification scheme will help readers understand. How many subtomograms did classification started? Were the 45% class classified into two (25% and 20%) groups by two-step classification or at once (the entire subtomograms were classified into three groups directly?

Significance
Nevertheless this work demonstrated capability of cellular cryo-ET, especially analysis of structural heterogeneity. Thus, while biological topics handled are rather specialized for cilia from flagellate, this work will attract attention of any biologist interested in molecular structure in vivo. It is worth for publication in a high journal after addressing the points above. This reviewer believes that the authors can address these points easily with additional analysis.

Reviewer #2
Here, Nazarov and colleagues report sub-tomogram average (STA) maps of centrioles with 16 to 40 Å resolution from Trichonympha spp., Trichonympha agilis, and Teranympha mirabilis. Even though the authors have previously described the centriole architecture of T. spp, these STA maps of higher resolution revealed new features of centrioles, like polarized Cartwheel Inner Density (CID) and the pinhead. They also observed Filament-like structure (FLS) from T. mirabilis which seems to correspond to the CID from other species. Interestingly, they suggest that one and two SASS6 rings are stacked in an alternative fashion to make the central hub in T. mmirabilis ( Figure 5). The following issue should be addressed: Major points 1. Figure 4E. Authors mentioned in the manuscript that "We observed that every other double hub units in the 36% T. mirabilis class appears to exhibit a slight tilt angle relative to the vertical axis". When I see the other side, it does not seem to be tilted. Could the authors explain this? Significance I believe these results are of interest for all centrosome researchers, and would like to recommend this manuscript be published in the EMBO journal which is affiliated with the Review Commons.

Reviewer #3
In this manuscript Nazrov et al., use cryo-electron tomography (CET) to analyse the structure of the centriole cartwheel. The Gonczy lab have previously generated a ground-breaking structure of the cartwheel from Trichonympha spp (T. spp.) (Guichard et al., Science, 2012; Guichard et al., Curr. Biol., 2013). This work is a direct continuation of those studies but using modern technology to get higher resolution images of the T. spp. cartwheel, and comparing this to the cartwheel from Triconympha agilis and from another distantly related flagellate Tetranympha mirabilis.
The data is generally well presented and of high quality. I am not an expert in CET, so it would be advisable to get the opinion from a reviewer who is, but the Gonczy lab are experienced in these techniques so I would not anticipate any problems. I have to admit that the title of the paper did not excite me, and I expected this to be a very worthy, but incremental study. It was a pleasure to find out that the extra detail provided by the increased resolution has revealed several new and unexpected features that have important implications for our understanding of cartwheel assembly and function. Most important are the potential asymmetry of the cartwheel hub, apparent variations in the packing mechanism of the stacked rings (even within the same cartwheel), and the potential offsetting of ring stacking. These findings will be of great interest to the field, and so I am strongly supportive of publication in The EMBO Journal. I have only a few points that I think the authors should consider.
1. Nazarov et al., conclude that the cartwheel structure is intrinsically asymmetric. This is most convincingly based on the displacement of the CID within the hub, but they state that the Discussion that the potential offset between the Sas-6 double rings generates an inherently polar structure. I didn't understand why this is the case. Looking at Fig.S9A,B I can see that the offset in B could tilt to the left (as shown here) or to the right (if the structure was flipped by 180o). But I couldn't see how this makes this structure polar in the sense that a molecule coming into dock with the structure could only bind to one side of the offset structure shown in B, but to both sides of the aligned structure shown in A. I think this needs to be explained better, as it is crucial to understand where any potential polarity in the cartwheel structure comes from.
2. Related to this last point, in a co-submitted paper Klena et al. do not report such an asymmetry in the hub structures they have solved from several different species (neither in the tilting of the hub, or the displacement of the CID). I think it would be worth both sets of authors commenting on this point.
3. The authors data strongly suggests that the T. agg. and Te. mir. hubs are composed of a mixture of single and double Sas-6 rings. In contrast, the T. spp. cartwheel only has a single class of rings, but it wasn't absolutely clear if the authors think this comprises a single or double ring. In the text it is presented as though the elongation of the hub densities in the vertical direction is a new feature of the T. agg cartwheel (Fig.2H,I), but to me it looks as though this is also apparent in the T. spp. cartwheel (Fig.2C,D). The authors should address this directly and, if they believe that T. spp. has a double ring, they should comment on whether this more regular structure seems to have offset rings. If not, then the offset rings are unlikely to be the source of asymmetry that leads to the asymmetric displacement of the CID. Finally, if the authors think these are double rings, they should also be clear that they would now slightly re-interpret their original T. spp. cartwheel model (Figure 2, Guichard et al., Curr. Biol.). There is no embarrassment in this-a higher resolution structure has simply revealed more detail.
4. The authors conclude that T. mirabilis cartwheels lack a CID and instead have a filament-like structure (FLS). I wonder whether it is more likely that the FLS is really a highly derived CID that appears to be structurally distinct when analysed in this way, but that will ultimately have a similar molecular composition. This situation might be analogous to the central tube in C. elegans, which by EM appears to be distinct from the central cartwheel seen in most other species, but is of course still composed of Sas-6. This historical tube/cartwheel nomenclature is now cumbersome to deal with, so perhaps it would be better to be cautious and not give the T. mirabilis structure a completely new name-how about "unusual CID" (uCID).

Significance See above.
We thank the reviewers for their useful suggestions to improve the manuscript and their support for publication. We have addressed all the comments that have been raised and carried out the suggested additional analyses, resulting in a significantly improved revised version of the manuscript. We provide hereafter a detailed point-bypoint response to all questions and comments of the three reviewers.

Reviewer #1 (Evidence, reproducibility and clarity (Required)):
Centriole structure has been an attractive but challenging research topic for years. Pierre Gonczy's group has been working on its structure using cryo-electron tomography (cryo-ET). While the axoneme, which has longitudinal periodicity, was analyzed by several groups by cryo-ET for more than a decade, cryo-ET study on the centriole suffers from poor signal to noise ratio due to its limited length and thus fewer periodicity. With improved spatial resolution, they provided further detail with clear polarity, which will deepen our thought about the initial stage of ciliogenesis. They also compared two Trichonympha species (spp and agilis) as well as another flagellate, Teranympha mirabilis, and extended their intriguing evolutional and mechanical hypotheses based on structural differences. Despite improved spatial resolution, it is still not possible to identify proteins in the cryo-ET map (cellular cryo-ET will not reach such high resolution in the near future). Therefore, this work is rather geometrically descriptive, which will inspire molecular biologists to identify molecules by other methods. Nevertheless, this work demonstrated capability of cellular cryo-ET, especially analysis of structural heterogeneity. Thus, while biological topics handled are rather specialized for cilia from flagellate, this work will attract attention of any biologist interested in molecular structure in vivo. It is worth for publication in a high Journal after addressing the points below. This reviewer believes that the authors can address these points easily with additional analysis.
We are grateful to the reviewer for the favorable evaluation and the many valuable suggestions, in particular concerning the processing pipeline, which we addressed by additional analyses, as detailed below. We thank the reviewer for this interesting suggestion, which we fully adhere to. As a result, we have generated a graphical summary of the work, which is shown in the new Figure panels 6B-F. Moreover, Figure 6A provides an evolutionary perspective regarding the presence of the CID and of what is now referred to as the fCID (filamentous CID, previously: FLS, see response to reviewer 3). This also helps to link our findings with the companion manuscript by Klena et al. This new Figure 6 is referred to extensively in the discussion of the revised manuscript (pages 13-16).
Then average scheme should be shown in more detail, especially assumption of periodicity, Materials and Methods. The cartwheel hub was averaged with 25nm periodicity (as discussed below). Was the pinhead averaged with 16nm (as detected by FFT in Fig.S2L)? How about the triplet?
This reviewer is not completely sure if the longitudinal averaging strategy is justifiable. Since periodicity of each domain is not trivial, logically the initial average must be done with the size of least common multiple (or larger). It is likely 96nm, assuming 25nm of the central hub is 3 times of microtubule periodicity and 16nm of the pinhead is twice of MT. 96nm average should be possible with a long cartwheel in this work. Alternative, in case periodicity is independent of MT and thus there is no least common multiple, is random picking and classification mentioned in "4. Periodicity". This should also be possible, since they can pick enough number of particles from long cartwheels.
We apologize that the initial version of the manuscript was not sufficiently clear regarding the averaging pipeline that was pursued. To rectify this, we now provide a new Figure S1B to graphically explain the approach followed for STA. As depicted in this figure panel, the step size for sub-volume extraction was 25 nm both centrally and peripherally. This step size was selected because it corresponds to ~3x the major periodicity of ~8.5 nm observed in the power spectra of the sub-volumes. The 25 nm step size is larger than that previously used (i.e. 17 nm in Guichard et al. 2013), in order to identify potential features with larger periodicities. The fact that the step size was of 25 nm in all cases is now mentioned explicitly in the Materials and Methods section of the revised manuscript (line 649).
We agree with the reviewer that 96 nm averaging is possible given the long cartwheel analyzed here, and such a piece of data was in fact included in the original submission, although with a different purpose. Indeed, we carried out STA using ~(100 nm) 3 subvolumes (with binning 3 to reduce computational time), the results of which are reported in Figure S7 (previously Fig. S6). For the purpose of this analysis, we focused on the lateral organization of the cartwheel, but did not use this dataset to explore other periodicities because of the limitations inherent to a binning 3 data set.

Classification
The authors analyzed structural heterogeneity inside the cartwheel hub, employing reference-free classification by Relion software. The program reveals multiple coexisting structures -two from Trichonympha agilis and three from Teranympha, respectively. Whereas this is an exciting finding and shows future research direction of this field, interpretation of this classification must be done carefully. It is puzzling that major (55%) population of T. agilis shows more ambiguous features than the minor population (45%), while spatial resolutions by FSC are not so different -for example, Fig.2H vs Fig.S5C. In case of Teranympha, it is even more drastic - Fig.4D (major class) seems blurred along the centriolar axis, compared to Fig. 4E (minor class). This reviewer is afraid that these "major" classes might contain more than one structure and after subaveraging be blurred in detailed features. The apparent good spatial resolution could be explained, when two structures coexist and subtomograms are aligned within each subclass. Probably lower resolution at the spoke region of the major class (Fig.S2A) than that of the minor class (Fig.S2D) is a sign of heterogeneity within this class. Another risk could be subtomograms with poorer S/N being categorized to one class (due to lack of feature to be properly classified). Fig.S5F (black dots localized in one tomogram) raised this concern.
The following investigation will help to solve this issue. 1. Extract and re-classify subtomograms belonging to the major population. 2. Direct observation of tomograms. The authors could plot two classes of Teranympha (as they did for T. agilis in Fig.S5) and find features of the cylindrical cartwheel hub in two conformations (as shown Fig.4DE). Since such a feature was directly observed in tomograms from the other manuscript (left panels of Fig.S6AC in Klena et al.), it should be possible in this work as well.
We agree with the reviewer that the interpretation of the classification must be done with care, and share her/his interest in better understanding the structural variability between cartwheels classes in T. agilis and T. mirabilis. Although poor S/N may in theory result in erroneous joint classifications, we note that all maps in the original submission stemmed from extensive focused 3D classification, which removed defective and spurious sub-volumes, nevertheless defining distinct classes in the cases reported. Obviously, however, we cannot exclude that much larger data sets and future software advances may lead to the identification of additional features that would allow further sub-classes to be identified.
Regardless, we followed the two suggestions the reviewer offered to us and have (1) extracted and re-classified sub-tomograms belonging to the major populations and (2) undertaken a direct observation of tomograms. These two points are developed in turn below.
(1) We have performed a further round of classification of the major populations in T. agilis (55 % class) and T. mirabilis (64 % class), to assess whether additional subclasses might be identified and thus help further improve the quality of the central cartwheel map. However, this additional round did not yield new sub-classes nor notable improvement in the map quality as judged by visual inspections. We show in Rebuttal Figure 1 a comparison in each case of the original STA and the corresponding STA upon such re-classification. Importantly, all conclusions spelled out in the original submission hold upon further re-classification, indicating that the initial classification converged to the best map quality based on the current data set and available computational resources. (2) We have followed the suggestion of the reviewer and now show raw tomograms to confirm that the classes correspond to bona fide structures and not to processing artefacts (new Figures S1C-F). The resulting new Figure S1D for instance shows that the striking variations observed between classes in the T. agilis STA are also visible in the raw tomogram. The more subtle variations among T. mirabilis classes are more difficult to observe in the raw tomogram, but inherent variations that reflect the presence of two classes are nevertheless observed.
Furthermore, following the reviewer's suggestion, we now mapped the distribution of the two T. mirabilis cartwheel classes onto tomograms, revealing that both classes can occur next to each other within the same centriole (new Figure S8E).

Periodicity mismatch
In Fig. 2CD The reviewer wonders whether there might be a periodicity discrepancy within one map, for instance between CID and spokes in the T. spp. cartwheel map ( Fig. 2C and Fig. 2D). Here, the periodicity determined from the STA maps is 8.5 ± 0.2 nm (SD, N=4) for the CID and 8.0 ± 1.5 nm (SD, N=2) for the spokes. Based on these standard deviations, there is indeed no significant difference between the two, and thus no periodicity discrepancy. The same applies for measurements in T. agilis and T. mirabilis. The SDs were reported already in the figure legends of the original submission, and we would prefer to leave them there if possible and not mention them in the figures, which are pretty busy as is. We apologize if this was not clear enough in the initial manuscript. Likewise, one may wonder whether there might be periodicity discrepancies between structures from distinct maps, for instance between CID and A-links from T. spp. (Fig. 2C and Fig. 3D). Again, the measurements are within error, since the distance between adjacent CIDs is 8.5 ± 0.2 nm (N=4) and between adjacent A-links 8.4 ± 0.4 nm (N=6); a similar conclusion applies for the corresponding measurement comparisons in T. agilis and T. mirabilis. The figure legends have been altered in the revised manuscript to spell out that there are no significant differences between periodicities (lines 856-858).
Furthermore, we would like to stress that, by definition, STA value are average distances. For instance, in the case of T. spp., the central cartwheel STA was obtained from 511 sub-volumes, and thus the reported N=2 represents the average distance from 511 sub-volumes. Since this is an average, errors can therefore not accumulate over longer distances. This point has also been clarified in the figure legends (line 856-858).

Periodicity
They averaged subtomograms extracted with spacing of 252A with initial average as the first template (p.18 Line22). This means they assumed 25nm periodicity from the beginning and excluded different or larger unit size (if they take search range wide, they could detect difference periodicity, but will still be biased by initially assumed 25nm). 25nm average allowed them to see more detail than before (when they assumed 8nm periodicity), but there is still a risk of bias from references. To avoid this risk, this reviewer would propose classification of randomly extracted (but of course along the cylindrical hub or along the triplet microtubules, so onedimensionally random picking) subtomograms. This experiment will end up with multiple sub-averages, which are 25nm (or multiple times of that) shifted from each other. Then it will prove their assumption.
We agree with the reviewer that in theory the choice of periodicity could introduce a bias. This is why we have chosen a larger step size than in our initial work, corresponding to ~3x the major periodicity of ~8.5 nm observed in the power spectrum of the sub-volumes, as mentioned above. Regardless, following the reviewer's suggestion, we have now explored other types of periodicities by re-analyzing the dataset through extraction of non-overlapping sub-volumes along the proximal-distal centriole axis. In doing so, we randomized the starting position of the first box between tomograms, reaching the same goal as with random picking but maximizing the number of sub-volumes. We carried out this analysis for all T. spp., T. agilis and T. mirabilis cartwheel classes, and found no notable differences that would affect the conclusions of the manuscript compared to the initial overlapping sub-volume classification, albeit generally with a noisier STA due to the lower number of subvolumes. A comparison of the two approaches is provided in Rebuttal Figure 2. Moreover, all the points regarding the choice of periodicity have been further clarified in the expanded Materials and Methods section (pages 19-21).

Rebuttal Figure 2: Reclassification with non-overlapping sub-volumes (A-F) Transverse (top) and longitudinal (bottom) views of T. spp. (A, B) T. agilis (C, D) and
T. mirabilis (E, F) central cartwheel 3D maps. The final maps reported in the manuscript (A, C, E) were generated with a 25 nm step size, yielding overlapping sub-volumes, whereas the maps in (B, D, F) were generated from non-overlapping sub-volumes, with no notable differences between the two that would affect the conclusions of the manuscript.

Minor points: They discussed difference of stacked SAS-6 rings in the cartwheel from various species. How much is the sequence difference of SAS-6 among these species?
Unfortunately, no genomic or transcriptomic data has been published for the species investigated here, although the sparse molecular data available from small subunit rRNA sequences allows one to establish an overall molecular phylogeny. We previously identified a SAS-6 homologue in T. agilis (Guichard et al. 2013), which shares 20 % identity and 45 % similarity with C. reinhardtii SAS-6. Despite low sequence conservation, the structural conservation of SAS-6 is predicted to be high between the two organisms (Guichard et al. 2013). We apologize if these points were not expressed sufficiently clearly in the initial rendition and have adapted the wording in the revised manuscript (lines 325-332).

Are the authors sure that CID is nine-fold symmetric? It is not trivial.
We thank the reviewer for bringing up this interesting point. We have applied 9-fold symmetrization to the entire central cartwheel comprising spokes, hub and CID/ fCID, a choice guided by the apparent 9-fold symmetry of the spokes and peripheral element. We investigated the impact of symmetrization on the CID by relaxing symmetry from C9 to C1 during refinement, but did not observe a difference, and thus continued with C9 symmetry, which improves map resolution by S/N ratio enhancement and additional missing wedge compensation. In addition, we have also analyzed the CID without symmetrization, as reported in Figure S7 (previously: Fig.  S6). Note that these maps were generated with larger sub-volumes centered on the spokes to comprise hub, spokes and microtubule triplets, explaining the resulting lower resolution, as the missing wedge is not compensated. Despite these limitations, however, the unsymmetrized CID shown in Figure S7A and S7E resembles the one in the symmetrized maps of Figure 2, indicating that the CID indeed exhibits 9-fold radial symmetry. That this is the case is spelled out explicitly in the revised manuscript (lines 1145-1147).

p.8 Line1: It would be nice if more detailed description about MIPs, correlating to recent high resolution works from Bui and Brown labs.
We agree that a more detailed comparison with recently identified axonemal MIPs was needed and have expanded the discussion accordingly (lines 481-492).
Apologies about this. The original statement might have been unclear because of the word "respectively" that was used incorrectly. The sentence has been clarified (lines 187-189).
p.18 5 lines from bottom "S6C, S6F": How can these panels be power spectra to measure spacing? Typo?
We thank the reviewer for having spotted this typo, which has been corrected (now Fig. S4C and S4F).

Fig.1C: Another cross-section from the distal region will be helpful. A longer scale bar is better for readers' understanding.
We understand that the reviewer is curious about the distal region, and cross-section views of resin-embedded sections from T. agilis are available and could be provided if necessary. However, given that the focus of the manuscript is strictly on the cartwheelbearing proximal region, we felt that featuring the distal region in detail would break the narrative. Therefore, we suggest to keep Figure 1 as in the original manuscript. Following the reviewer's suggestion, we increased the size of the scale bars from 10 nm to 20 nm in Figure 1C as well as in the corresponding Figure S8C.

Fig.S6F: It would be informative if the subclasses (25% and 20%) are distinguished in this mapping.
As per the reviewer's request, we provide in Rebuttal Figure 3 a side-by-side comparison of the T. agilis 25 % and 20 % classes centered on the spokes, which are noisier than the composite 45 % class due to the lower number of sub-volumes in each sub-class. Given that there are no notable differences between the two maps that would affect any of the conclusions of the manuscript, we feel it is best to keep what is now Figure S7F (previously: Fig. S6F) unchanged in the revised manuscript. A figure to explain the classification scheme will help readers understand. How many subtomograms did classification started? Were the 45% class classified into two (25% and 20%) groups by two-step classification or at once (the entire subtomograms were classified into three groups directly?
We thank the reviewer for this useful suggestion. As a result, we have generated a new Supplemental Figure S1G-J that provides a graphical overview of the classification scheme, together with sub-volume numbers for all deposited maps, thus nicely complementing Table S1.

Reviewer #1 (Significance (Required)):
Nevertheless, this work demonstrated capability of cellular cryo-ET, especially analysis of structural heterogeneity. Thus, while biological topics handled are rather specialized for cilia from flagellate, this work will attract attention of any biologist interested in molecular structure in vivo. It is worth for publication in a high journal after addressing the points above. This reviewer believes that the authors can address these points easily with additional analysis.
We reiterate our thanks to this reviewer for her/his favorable evaluation and detailed suggestions, which enabled us to generate a strengthened manuscript.

Reviewer #2 (Evidence, reproducibility and clarity (Required)):
Here, Nazarov and colleagues report sub-tomogram average (STA) maps of centrioles with 16 to 40 Å resolution from Trichonympha spp., Trichonympha agilis, and Teranympha mirabilis. Even though the authors have previously described the centriole architecture of T. spp, these STA maps of higher resolution revealed new features of centrioles, like polarized Cartwheel Inner Density (CID) and the pinhead. They also observed Filament-like structure (FLS) from T. mirabilis which seems to correspond to the CID from other species. Interestingly, they suggest that one and two SASS6 rings are stacked in an alternative fashion to make the central hub in T. mirabilis ( Figure 5). The following issue should be addressed: Major points 1. Figure 4E. Authors mentioned in the manuscript that "We observed that every other double hub units in the 36% T. mirabilis class appears to exhibit a slight tilt angle relative to the vertical axis". When I see the other side, it does not seem to be tilted. Could the authors explain this?
We apologize that this aspect was not explained in sufficient detail. The left and right sides of the hub indeed appeared different in transverse views across the cartwheel center (previous Fig. 4E). This was because the area we selected in the original submission was centered on one emanating spoke. Due to the 9-fold symmetry one spoke density was selected on the right side, while the region between two spokes was displayed on the left side (as was illustrated by the slice across the center in previous Figure 4A; dashed rectangles in 4.0 nm panel). We have now selected a larger area to include spokes from both sides of the hub and thus better visualize this offset as shown in the modified Figure 4D-E.
We apologize for this typo that has been corrected.

I believe these results are of interest for all centrosome researchers and would like to recommend this manuscript be published in the EMBO journal which is affiliated with the Review Commons.
We thank the reviewer for the recommendation to submit the revised manuscript to EMBO Journal, which we have followed.

Reviewer #3 (Evidence, reproducibility and clarity (Required)):
In this manuscript Nazrov et al., use cryo-electron tomography (CET) to analyse the structure of the centriole cartwheel. The Gonczy lab have previously generated a ground-breaking structure of the cartwheel from Trichonympha spp (T. spp.) (Guichard et al., Science, 2012; Guichard et al., Curr. Biol., 2013). This work is a direct continuation of those studies but using modern technology to get higher resolution images of the T. spp. cartwheel and comparing this to the cartwheel from Trichonympha agilis and from another distantly related flagellate Teranympha mirabilis.
The data is generally well presented and of high quality. I am not an expert in CET, so it would be advisable to get the opinion from a reviewer who is, but the Gonczy lab are experienced in these techniques so I would not anticipate any problems. I have to admit that the title of the paper did not excite me, and I expected this to be a very worthy, but incremental study. It was a pleasure to find out that the extra detail provided by the increased resolution has revealed several new and unexpected features that have important implications for our understanding of cartwheel assembly and function. Most important are the potential asymmetry of the cartwheel hub, apparent variations in the packing mechanism of the stacked rings (even within the same cartwheel), and the potential offsetting of ring stacking. These findings will be of great interest to the field, and so I am strongly supportive of publication in The EMBO Journal. I have only a few points that I think the authors should consider.
We thank the reviewer for this positive feedback and the recommendation to submit to EMBO Journal, which we hereby follow.
Prompted by the comment of the reviewer, we revised the title to make it more informative and appealing to readers: "Novel features of centriole polarity and cartwheel stacking revealed by cryo-tomography".
1. Nazarov et al., conclude that the cartwheel structure is intrinsically asymmetric. This is most convincingly based on the displacement of the CID within the hub, but they state that the Discussion that the potential offset between the Sas-6 double rings generates an inherently polar structure. I didn't understand why this is the case. Looking at Fig.S9A We apologize for not having been sufficiently clear about how two SAS-6 rings with an offset could impart organelle polarity. The reviewer is correct that an offset between superimposed rings alone is not sufficient to generate polarity at a larger scale. The important point we would like to stress, however, is that we discovered concerted polarity in multiple locations, from the central hub to the peripheral elements as illustrated in Fig. S7C-D, S7G-H, S7K-L and S7O-P (previously: Fig. S6). Prompted by the reviewer's comment, we now better emphasize the asymmetric tilt angles of merging spokes, as highlighted also in the improved Figure S7. This asymmetric spoke tilt angle allows one to discriminate the proximal and distal side of a double SAS-6 ring, which is now explained better in the text (lines 259-263 & 502-510).

Related to this last point, in a co-submitted paper Klena et al. do not report such an asymmetry in the hub structures they have solved from several different species (neither in the tilting of the hub, or the displacement of the CID). I think it would be worth both sets of authors commenting on this point.
We agree that comparing and contrasting the results of the two companion manuscripts is important and we have updated the text as a consequence in several places (lines 444, 467, 507, 536, 985, 1000). We know from our previous work (Guichard et al. 2013) that the asymmetry of the hub and spoke is not visible at lower resolution. In the accompanying manuscript by Klena et al., no offset in the hub or asymmetric CID localization is reported, probably due to lower resolution and differences between species. We apologize if the conclusions drawn about T. spp. cartwheel hubs were not sufficiently clearly expressed. Like the reviewer, we think that elongated hub elements are also discernible in T. spp., something that is also illustrated by the intensity plot profile in Figure 2C (double peaks on light blue line). These points are spelled out more explicitly in the revised manuscript (lines 177-179). In addition, to emphasize the conservation of the double hub units in both Trichonympha species, we have likewise adapted the text for T. agilis (lines 198-201).
As for the offset observed within T. spp. spoke densities in Figure S10H, we interpret this as evidence for an offset of the double ring at the level of the hub, although we have not observed such offset in T. spp. for reasons that are unclear. The fact that this revises our previous interpretation based on a lower resolution map of T. spp. was already mentioned in the initial submission but is now better emphasized (lines 171-172 & 179-181).

The authors conclude that T. mirabilis cartwheels lack a CID and instead have a filament-like structure (FLS). I wonder whether
it is more likely that the FLS is really a highly derived CID that appears to be structurally distinct when analysed in this way, but that will ultimately have a similar molecular composition. This situation might be analogous to the central tube in C. elegans, which by EM appears to be distinct from the central cartwheel seen in most other species, but is of course still composed of Sas-6. This historical tube/cartwheel nomenclature is now cumbersome to deal with, so perhaps it would be better to be cautious and not give the T. mirabilis structure a completely new name-how about "unusual CID" (uCID).
We share the view that the CID and the "FLS" -the term used in the initial submissionmay have a related molecular composition and function, as we had also speculated in the discussion of the original submission. Following the reviewer's suggestion, and in an effort to have a more uniform nomenclature, we propose to dub the T. mirabilis structure "filamentous CID" (fCID). This highlights better the similar location of these two entities and their potential shared function, while stressing the filamentous nature of the fCID. We further emphasize this point by providing the new Figure 6A to compare the presence of the two entities in select species. The discussion has also been adapted accordingly (pages 13-14).
Reviewer #3 (Significance (Required)): see above 1st Editorial Decision Re: EMBOJ-2020-10624 9 Novel feat ures of cent riole polarit y and cart wheel st acking revealed by cryo-t omography Thank you again for having transferred your already revised Review Commons manuscript to The EMBO Journal for our considerat ion. In light of the posit ive previous assessment and the int erest of the subject of the st udy, I decided to treat it essent ially as a revision, sending it back to referee 1 for assessing your responses to the various technical concerns originally raised by this reviewers. As you will see from the comment s copied below, referee 1 is fully sat isfied wit h your revision, and we shall therefore be happy to accept this work for The EMBO Journal, pending incorporat ion of various edit orial point s as det ailed below: I am therefore returning the manuscript to you for a final round of minor revision, to allow you to make these adjustments and upload all modified files. Once we will have received them, we should be ready to proceed with formal acceptance and production of the manuscript. (2) demonst rat ed 25nm periodicit y by analyzing randomly (t hus non-biased way) ext ract ed subt omograms. This reviewer appreciat es their praisable revision work and st rongly recommend publicat ion of this manuscript in the EMBO Journal.
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