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Original SubmissionAugust 1, 2019 |
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PONE-D-19-21744 Identification of triple-negative breast cancer cell lines classified under the same molecular subtype using different molecular characterization techniques: implications for translational research PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Ueno, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. The reviewers felt that this manuscript would be important in providing a framework for investigators to select in vitro and in vivo models of TNBC. Please address the reviewer comments, which focused on a lack of sufficient details in the classification strategy and which publicly available data were used for analysis and rationale for value cut-offs. In addition, please comment on how reproducible the classification calls are using independent public data sets. There were also several clarifications or improvements needed related to data presented in the Figures and data tables (Reviewers 1-2). Finally, a statistics reviewer raised questions related to correlation and cut-off values. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Nov 05 2019 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Competing interests can arise in relationship to an organization or another person. Please follow this link to our website for more details on competing interests: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/competing-interests [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly Reviewer #3: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: I Don't Know Reviewer #2: I Don't Know Reviewer #3: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: PONE-D-19-21744 The manuscript by Fernandez and colleagues relays important information for the molecular classification of TNBC subtypes in cell line models. There are a number of points that should be clarified and/or expanded prior to publication. 1. The methods indicate that publicly available gene expression data were used to classify the 28 TNBC cell lines. The authors should explicitly state which publically available data. Two references were cited. How was the data from the different articles analyzed? Analysis of this data should be more thoroughly explained in the methods section. Additionally, could the use of publicly available data have an impact on discordant results between cell line and xenograft results? For discordant results did the authors repeat RNA sequencing from cell lines grown in their own laboratory and compare to their RNA sequencing analysis from the xenograft studies presented here? 2. Figure 1: could the authors please indicate which cell lines are represented in Figure 1. Also, please include the data for each cell line in a supplemental file. 3. In Table 1 it would be helpful to annotate which cell lines were classified as dual subtypes. 4. The authors should present the analysis using TNBCtype from the xenograft data in addition to the TNBCtype-IM (Table 3). 5. Page 9, line 177 indicates that 6 of 17 tumor xenograft models tested were concordant, but in Table 3 HCC70 cell line and xenograft data also appears to be concordant for BL2. 6. Please clarify, were xenografts only established from 17/28 because 11 of the cell lines did not grow in vivo? Also clarify, was xenograft tumor data from an n=1 for each cell line? Reviewer #2: Identification of triple negative breast cancer cell lines classified under the same molecular subtype using different molecular characterization techniques: implications of translational research. Fernandez et al. Manuscript: PONE-D-19-21744 The study by Fernandez et al. investigates the classification of triple negative breast cancer cell lines grown in vitro and as orthotopic xenograft transplant models in vivo. The goal is to define the TNBC subtypes of these cell lines using the original TNBCtype and modified TNBCtype –IM algorithms. The impact of the proposed studies lies in defining the molecular subtypes in order to provide the scientific community a framework by which to select these lines, either in vitro or in vivo, to model TNBC subtypes for mechanistic and/or preclinical studies. While the current study does address this goal, I have several moderate and minor concerns that I have outlined below. Major Concerns: 1. The classification strategy is not well described. The authors have not defined the correlation cut-off used to define the subgroup classification (line 154-157) nor have they described the rationale for the selection of that value. Likewise, the authors state (line 153-154): “If more than one subtype surpassed the cut-off value with no significant difference between the two...” It was not clear how the authors determined whether there was a significant difference. In general, the methods should be more clearly written. 2. The authors should provide a table of correlation coefficients for each cell lines and each subgroup. While the authors have made the calls for each cell line, it would allow the reader to gauge the strength of the correlation if these data were provided. 3. It is not clear how reproducible these classification calls are. The authors should use an independent dataset (i.e. CCLE RNAseq data) to examine subtype classification for these cell lines. This would provide additional confidence that subtype calls are not dependent on culturing methods, specific growth conditions or technical or experimental variables. This is particularly relevant as subtype calls for 8/28 or 28.6% of the cell lines analyzed in the current study and the original Lehman JCI paper are not concordant using the TNBCtype calls (Table 2 of this study vs. Table 3 in Lehman 2011 JCI paper). Minor Concerns: 1. Figure 1 is not very clear. It also appears to be lacking a legend as well as y-axis labels. 2. Table 2 and 3 seem somewhat redundant and the data could be merged into a single table. 3. Reference 2 appear to be merged with Reference 1 in the References Cited section. Reviewer #3: A) Spearman's correlation test was used to determine sub-type categories. A score of .195 was presented in Figure 1 as the cutoff selected; however, that score is considered "weak correlation" at best. Could the author address this as well as why Spearman's was selected over other tests available? B) The number of available samples in each subcategory seems rather now. In MSL category only two of the available four was correctly selected. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. 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PONE-D-19-21744R1 Identification of triple-negative breast cancer cell lines classified under the same molecular subtype using different molecular characterization techniques: implications for translational research PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Ueno, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please address Reviewer #2's concerns about rigor and reproducibility of the data sets, including concerns about correlation coefficients and variance that may be introduced by different growth conditions among laboratories. In particular, please address this comment: "..the investigators should demonstrate that the same cell line, grown in the same way (i.e. in vitro or in vivo) is consistently classified to the same subtype; there are multiple publicly available RNAseq datasets that can be used to complete these studies." It would also be useful to address some of the reviewers concerns and potential limitations of the study in the discussion, which Reviewer #2 found to be brief. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Mar 07 2020 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
Please note while forming your response, if your article is accepted, you may have the opportunity to make the peer review history publicly available. The record will include editor decision letters (with reviews) and your responses to reviewer comments. If eligible, we will contact you to opt in or out. We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Tiffany N. Seagroves, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: (No Response) Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: The revised manuscript is improved; however a few concerns remain. First, the level of rigor in the subtype calls is not clear. The authors should report the correlation coefficient values for each cell line or xenograft and each TNBC subtype. Given that most of the reported correlation coefficients are low, this would afford the reader additional insight into the strength of the calls and potential concerns with selecting any given model system for subsequent studies. Secondly, while the authors do demonstrate concordance in subtype calls when specific cell lines are grown in vitro or as an in vivo xenograft, it is unclear how reproducible the subtypes call is between multiple datasets. As I noted in my previous review, and in this review, the subtype correlation coffecicients are relatively weak. As such, the investigators should demonstrate that the same cell line, grown in the same way (i.e. in vitro or in vivo) is consistently classified to the same subtype; there are multiple publicly available RNAseq datasets that can be used to complete these studies. If this is not reproducible, there are concerns with the selection of these lines for future studies as growth conditions will undoubtedly vary between laboratories. Finally, the manuscript is relatively well written, but there are a number of awkwardly worded sections and the discussion is rather brief. Reviewer #3: This reviewer believes the authors have completed all changes needed in the manuscript. The paper should be accepted. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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