The ectodomains determine ligand function in vivo and selectivity of DLL1 and DLL4 toward NOTCH1 and NOTCH2 in vitro

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Summary:

The manuscript addresses the important question of ligand-receptor specificity in the Notch signaling pathway. The authors describe structure-function analyses, and functional divergence, of the Notch ligands DLL1 and DLL4, using in vivo as well as in vitro techniques. The authors conclude that the DLL1 and DLL4 proteins activate the Notch1 and Notch2 receptors differently. DLL4 consistently activated NOTCH1 significantly better than DLL1, and DLL4 stimulated Notch2 significantly less efficiently than DLL1.To identify the domains of DLL1 and DLL4 that contributed to the observed differences in activating Notch1 and Notch2, domain swaps to generate a set of chimeric DLL1/DLL4 ligands was performed. These experiments revealed that the differences in activation potential of DLL4 and DLL1 toward Notch1 and Notch2 are encoded in the N-terminal part of the protein, comprising the MNNL-EGF3 domains, but also with a contribution from the third EGF repeat. This is interesting, as these regions lie outside the established receptor-ligand interaction domains.

Essential revisions:

1) In the Abstract the authors state, "Collectively, our data show that DLL4 and DLL1 preferentially activate NOTCH1 and NOTCH2, respectively,"; however, the N1/N2 ratio data in Figure 5A suggest that DLL1 has no preference for Notch1 over Notch2. Please clarify.

2) In the last paragraph of the subsection “Regions outside the known receptor binding domain are essential for full DLL1 function in vivo”, the authors use the word "undistinguishable", do the authors mean indistinguishable?

3) Regarding the in vivo data where different chimeras are used to substitute for DLL1 there appears to be additional staining or even puncta for the ligand, e.g. Figure 2Cd, Figure 3Cdfgi, Figure 6Bfh, that is not at the cell surface and is not seen in the wild-type tissues. Could the authors provide some explanation as to what this additional staining is and do they think that this accumulated ligand has any effect on the phenotypes that they are seeing?

4) In Figure 3Fc do the authors mean Dll1Dll4ki/Dll4ki rather than Dll1Dll1ki/Dll1ki as currently stated?

5) In Figure 5B, I would suggest that the authors label the domains of Notch1, Dll4, and Dll1 on the structures to clarify these regions for the reader who is not a structural biologist.

6) Figure 4E and F. Showing both black dots and triangles in the same graph is confusing.

7) Figure 5 and subsection “The region encompassing the MNNL up to and including EGF3 encodes the differential receptor selectivity of DLL1 and DLL4” MNNL-DSL (D1N-D_D4 & D4N-D_D1) values don't look intermediate but as low (if not lower) than D1N-E3_D4 – rephrase?

8) Discussion, second paragraph – D1ECD_D4ECD changed to D1ECD_D4ICD.

9) Much of the data (protein-protein levels, membrane levels and signalling activity) from the co-culture signalling studies are adjusted to a data point set to 1 and many of the analyses are further related to this reference value which is an average. There is high variability and the original data was not shown and the number of analyses were very high. I would like to see the original data, ask for a comparison between membrane levels, total protein levels and signal activity within a set of experiments to avoid making erroneous conclusions based on statistical "engineering"

10) Figure 4C, E and F Why only n=1 in Dll1? Does that represent the average? What is the variability?

11) Figure 5. Showing the N1 and N2 stimulations and not only the ratio could add some clarity (Despite varying membrane levels). Perhaps a supplementary figure?

12) Figure 5. How come D1N-E3 gives such a strong signal in reporter assays if it is not detectable/quantifiable on WB or biotinylation assay? Could you provide the image of the WB for assurance?

13) The chimeric ligand is expressed more efficiently than the endogenous one (Figure 3C). Could this affect the result?

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Reviewer #1:

The authors describe structure-function analyses, and functional divergence, of the Notch ligands DLL1 and DLL4, using cell co-culture assays, biochemical assays, and in vivo analyses of genetically modified mice expressing recombinant DLL1/DLL4 chimeric proteins. The authors demonstrate that, in cell based co-culture assays, the DLL1 and DLL4 proteins activate the NOTCH1 and NOTCH2 receptors differently. They generated mouse NOTCH1 and NOTCH2 reporter ES cell lines by integrating a Notch luciferase reporter in the Hprt locus of mouse E14TG2a ES (E14) cells, thus generating stable mN1 (N1rep) or mN2 (N2rep) reporter lines. These reporter lines were then co-cultured with ES cells with single copy integrations into the Hprt locus of the DLL1 or DLL4 coding sequences. Performing careful controls for total protein and cell surface protein expression levels, they showed that all DLL4 clones consistently activated N1 significantly better than all DLL1 clones, and all DLL4 clones stimulated mN2 significantly less efficiently than DLL1. To identify the domains of DLL1 and DLL4 that contributed to the observed differences in activating NOTCH1 and NOTCH2, they performed a series of domain swaps to generate a set of chimeric DLL1/DLL4 ligands. These experiments revealed that the differences in activation potential of DLL4 and DLL1 toward N1 and N2 are encoded in the N-terminal part of the protein, comprising the MNNL-EGF3 domains. Additional experiments showed that the third EGF repeat made an important contribution to receptor selectivity.

The authors then analyzed the importance of the amino acids that contact N1 in the binding interfaces of the MNNL and DSL domains in NOTCH receptor selectivity. In a series of biochemical experiments, the authors showed that swapping the contact residues of DLL4 onto DLL1 did not substantially affect Notch receptor activation compared to wildtype DLL1. Replacement of the DLL4 contact residues by the analogous residues of DLL1 slightly affected Notch receptor activation, but did not approach the activity difference of wildtype DLL1.

For in vivo analyses, the authors utilized a sophisticated genetic model system in which transgenes encoding chimeric DLL1/DLL4 ligands were introduced into the Hprt locus of E14 ES cells in a manner that requires Cre recombinase expression to permit expression of the chimeric ligand. Simultaneously, endogenous wildtype DLL1 expression was removed using a floxed Dll1 allele and a Cre driver (T(s):Cre) expressed in the primitive streak driven by a promoter derived from brachyury (T) locus. These experiments demonstrated that the extracellular domains of the DLL1 and DLL4 ligands regulated ligand function during somite formation. The authors then tested a chimeric ligand that contained the N-terminal region up to and including EGF3 of DLL1 fused to EGF4 and the remaining C-terminal portion of DLL4. Mice homozygous for this allele (and lacking the wildtype Dll1 allele) were still born and exhibited substantial axial skeletal defects, indicating that this chimeric allele cannot fully replace wildtype DLL1 function during development.

These experiments, as is characteristic of all the work from the Gossler and Blacklow laboratories, are carefully controlled, extremely thorough, and very convincing. This paper makes an important contribution to the literature on structure/function analysis of the Notch ligands.

Reviewer #2:

The authors submit an interesting and compelling manuscript that focuses on using different in vivo and cellular assays to characterize the functional differences between Dll1 and Dll4. The work is of high quality and the manuscript is well written. Moreover, their findings address an important area of Notch signaling and biology in general, and impact other recent publications that characterize functional differences between Dll1/4. If the authors were to address my relatively minor comments summarized below, I would recommend their manuscript to be published eLife.

In the Abstract the authors state, "Collectively, our data show that DLL4 and DLL1 preferentially activate NOTCH1 and NOTCH2, respectively,"; however, the N1/N2 ratio data in Figure 5A suggest that DLL1 has no preference for Notch1 over Notch2. Please clarify.

In the last paragraph of the subsection “Regions outside the known receptor binding domain are essential for full DLL1 function in vivo”, the authors use the word "undistinguishable", do the authors mean indistinguishable?

Regarding the in vivo data where different chimeras are used to substitute for DLL1 there appears to be additional staining or even puncta for the ligand, e.g. Figure 2Cd, Figure 3Cdfgi, Figure 6Bfh, that is not at the cell surface and is not seen in the wild-type tissues. Could the authors provide some explanation as to what this additional staining is and do they think that this accumulated ligand has any effect on the phenotypes that they are seeing?

In Figure 3Fc do the authors mean Dll1Dll4ki/Dll4ki rather than Dll1Dll1ki/Dll1ki as currently stated?

In Figure 5B, I would suggest that the authors label the domains of Notch1, Dll4, and Dll1 on the structures to clarify these regions for the reader who is not a structural biologist.

Reviewer #3:

The work by Tveriakhina and colleagues addresses the biochemical rational behind the context dependent functional differences of Notch ligands. The in vivo evidence is strong and they nicely demonstrate context dependent contributions of Notch ligand extracellular EGF repeats in vivo. They further demonstrate, although the data raise some concerns, that Dll1 and Dll4 ligands exhibit different receptor selectivity and discriminate between Notch1 and Notch2 receptors and that this is caused by differences in ligand ECD domains outside the established receptor-ligand interaction domains (contact domains). The paper is well written, clear and concise. The data is well presented and for the most part support the conclusions. The work provides novel insight into the receptor-ligand interphase and presents protein regions that contribute to functional divergence of ligands and warrants publication, provided the authors address the concerns raised.